Loads of really good info here but as it's a booklet for school children it needs a title, an intro and a sort of "find out more" section at the end - AND you MUST credit your sources. Make these changes to get to distinction.
Loads of really good info here but as it's a booklet for school children it needs a title, an intro and a sort of "find out more" section at the end - AND you MUST credit your sources. Make these changes to get to distinction.
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